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ikr this manhwa just throws "show, don't tell" out of the window and has lines like "Wow this is extremely significant!" (this is the best line in history, period) or how the ML just monologues his oh-so-tragic past (with the help of the vice-captain trying to make us sympathize with the asshole - well that failed) instead of actually taking time to develop him. what lazy writing.
This trope has me pissed too. Like the heroine - who keeps shoving it in our faces that she's trying to live her life to the fullest (i get it girl, stop repeating it so many times geez) - was literally pulled into this world just to "complete" the ML? does the author not have a problem with someone's whole life purpose being to fix a man's troubled past???
tbh i'm only staying for the art. it's so gorgeous it doesn't deserve a lazy, unoriginal story like this
it feels like the author's trying to cram all the popular tropes together but forgetting to actually make it flow well
the isekai part is so random and kinda pointless, it feels like it was just thrown in there bc why not
the ml is an ass but im sure he has some angsty tragic backstory to distract us from the fact he wanted to behead the fl right away and is just a thirst trap tbh