choppy and chaotic

seokjinie September 5, 2019 2:29 pm

it feels like the author's trying to cram all the popular tropes together but forgetting to actually make it flow well

the isekai part is so random and kinda pointless, it feels like it was just thrown in there bc why not

the ml is an ass but im sure he has some angsty tragic backstory to distract us from the fact he wanted to behead the fl right away and is just a thirst trap tbh

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    seokjinie September 5, 2019 2:33 pm

    anyways if you want isekai medical student, doctor elise is super good, or princess turned slave after war = light & shadow

    Setsuna Uchiha September 15, 2019 12:21 pm

    Not only that, he tried to kill an animal who was loyal to him for so long without investigation. The ml is trash and intolerable.

    KimJoysu September 15, 2019 2:28 pm

    ikr this manhwa just throws "show, don't tell" out of the window and has lines like "Wow this is extremely significant!" (this is the best line in history, period) or how the ML just monologues his oh-so-tragic past (with the help of the vice-captain trying to make us sympathize with the asshole - well that failed) instead of actually taking time to develop him. what lazy writing.
    This trope has me pissed too. Like the heroine - who keeps shoving it in our faces that she's trying to live her life to the fullest (i get it girl, stop repeating it so many times geez) - was literally pulled into this world just to "complete" the ML? does the author not have a problem with someone's whole life purpose being to fix a man's troubled past???
    tbh i'm only staying for the art. it's so gorgeous it doesn't deserve a lazy, unoriginal story like this

    Mari017 September 15, 2019 3:41 pm
    Not only that, he tried to kill an animal who was loyal to him for so long without investigation. The ml is trash and intolerable. Setsuna Uchiha

    Yes, the ml is trash, but it's not that he tried to kill the horse, those are the laws in Elpasa, he's obligated, he actually doesn't want to kill it.

    Setsuna Uchiha September 16, 2019 3:56 am
    Yes, the ml is trash, but it's not that he tried to kill the horse, those are the laws in Elpasa, he's obligated, he actually doesn't want to kill it. Mari017

    He didn't even try

    Mari017 September 16, 2019 5:55 am

    But yeah, I have to say that those laws are stupid lol