wtf that's way too short! It feels more like the first couple of pages of a chapter than a one-shot. One-shorts are supposed to be well-rounded and tell a full story, even if it has an open ending. This didn't have any of that. No character development, no story, nothing.
wtf that's way too short! It feels more like the first couple of pages of a chapter than a one-shot. One-shorts are supposed to be well-rounded and tell a full story, even if it has an open ending. This didn't have any of that. No character development, no story, nothing.