The ending

ParadoxicalParable August 29, 2019 11:20 pm

It was good, but the ending didn't feel like an ending. I know this is a common thing in yaoi, but if they had talked it out earlier it would have been much shorter and simpler. There were so many things at that point that just felt rushed or unfinished and there were so many loose strings not tied up. Even when they finally did talk, it didn't feel like there was anything really to it. It was good until it started rushing, and I'm really unsatisfied because it felt sort of empty and tiring for me by chapter 9. It felt awkward, not because of the AV since seme needs money, but because the other actor showed explicit interest the seme and it feels like he was never properly rejected. It left a bad taste in my mouth because the seme lied to the uke and never clarified anything, and the other actor was just left on hold basically. I'm very frustrated. The other actor's sole purpose was to spur drama, and that drama was never properly ended. I feel bad for the other actor because he doesn't seem like a bad person, and I feel bad for the uke and the seme because they're dumb. They're an idiot couple, but not in a cute way-- they're an idiot couple in the way it made me write this rant. It feels unfinished and empty. It was so drawn-out, yet the most important moments were rushed. The only part I could fully enjoy were the kids being sweeties.

Sorry about the rant, my dudes.

Responses
    Saphieer September 21, 2019 11:46 pm

    There was also the left out point of the brother-in-law who was supposed to visit.

    It was way too rushed. ( ̄へ ̄)

    Anonymous February 20, 2020 9:32 pm
    There was also the left out point of the brother-in-law who was supposed to visit.It was way too rushed. ( ̄へ ̄) Saphieer

    squel of this exist but cant find anyware

    Giyuuswaifu May 21, 2020 9:37 pm
    squel of this exist but cant find anyware @Anonymous

    I just read the sequel but the sequel was also kinda unfinished and rushed ╥﹏╥

    Saphieer May 22, 2020 1:16 am
    I just read the sequel but the sequel was also kinda unfinished and rushed ╥﹏╥ Giyuuswaifu

    Conclusion, this series was unfinished and rushed.
    ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    Giyuuswaifu May 22, 2020 10:35 am
    Conclusion, this series was unfinished and rushed.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ Saphieer

    yepp unfortunaly ( ̄へ ̄)