Given sensei's previous works, i wouldn't say it's sloppy per se. But it definitely felt like there was no intent, like they're still trying to figure out what to do with this story. This chapter seems to show otherwise though, looks like sensei is finally figuring out what they want to do with this series.
perhaps a bit cliche, but its omegaverse [yay my favourite mangaka is doing omegaverse!], the characters are individual and not much has been revealed about them yet [so not so well rounded yet, but can figure out they have motives and individual personalities] and the story thus far only has one "coincidence" , or are you unsatisfied at how easily the omega offered up his virginity? As always the art is amazing, even better than before. What did you find sloppy? [I want to understand your point of view]
No, plot is simple and easy to follow. You may not like the characters, but that doesn’t make the story sloppy.
its made with the intention of being read once and then forgotten, then onto the next one cause its a yaoi manga … its porn man and I love it
yeah, surprised its a 9.2 atm :/
Am I the only one who thinks this is sloppy? Like the storyline is and so are the characters (￣∇￣")