Actually, I don’t hand type the English words. I just put the translated script in a program. I’ve gone to school for many years I know my grammar haha. I will proof read it next time though.
Yeah, proofreading is definitely a good idea, so that the sentences actually makes sense. I was a little confused by "mortality"..? xD
What he meant was moral beliefs, as in thinking it was alright to do it in the bathroom
Ah, yes, that's what I thought.
Good job! The translation got better :) however, I think you're still struggling in deciding when to use "your" and "you're". I'm not a grammar nerd, but it does irritate and confuse me a bit lol so just fyi, "your" is used for explaining possession, such as your bag, your boyfriend, your lunch, etc. On the other hand, "you're" is the shortened version of "you are", which I assume you should've known how it is used. So good luck in translating the future updates! I'll be waiting for more XD