well lets be honest mangaka probably was forced to finish bc its the standard length of mangas in japan.
there is honestly lack of logic in yaoi and everyone knows that.
its bc its so stupid its comical and funny.
this supposed to be a light read. like a pretty girl u see on insta,like her a bit and then u scroll down and forget about her.
It was recommended by several readers and when I see the 9* rating and read all the positive comments below, my expectation was high. So when it becomes an utter disappointment I kinda want to warn other serious readers like me. Beside that, the way author executed this manga is simply lazy, it’s not even about being stupid and illogic.
If anyone wants a stupidly cliche yet funny and sexy, quick paced story done right, check out Burlesque Night (I hope that is the correct name, not so sure lol).
lol @ all the dislikes when your criticism is so valid. Who in their right mind proposes during a one night stand?! And he's just like "Oh, hey, I'm your dad." and that's IT.
Why wouldn't he propose during a one night stand? It's omegaverse. They can naturally sense their LIFE LONG partner. They know he or she is the one so no need for the extra time in getting to know each other to marry. This is not based off of real life, it's fiction. WE ALL should LOVE IT that way.
I have read a few omegaverse stories and lemme just say this, the way this author tells story is simply bad. A cliche story can still be okay or even good when it’s executed nicely. And no, we shouldn’t all feel your way. I get it that our opinions are different, and I respect yours, so please refrain from dictating my opinion and how I should feel about this manga.
i actually agree with you. when i finished this story I was like.. its not enough!! where are the rest??
I was told this is a really good omegaverse story with adorable kid, so here I am. I don’t think the story is bad, character development is okay though it could have been better, but what’s with that rocket pace?? Was author forced to finish within 6 chapter or something? They spend 3 chapters about unnecessary side characters like the tiny girl and her policeman, or the player guy (Kaji?) - granted his appearance plays a role in the story, but it could have been done without wasting so many pages. And then the climax, with all of its potential: omega’s bottled up feelings in 3-4 years, the alpha’s realisation of how much he had missed out, the bonding between the father and the kid, all of that - BAM 10 pages, a few tears and we are done. What???
Not to mention how “fast” they fell in love with each other, from the omega’s side it’s acceptable that he sorted of falling for the ideal “prince”, but how about Haruomi? Can you really fall in love with someone while being drunk simply because they are “cute”, then get serious enough to propose marriage after an one night stand without any deep emotional exchange? My head hurts with just how things escalated... the romance just seems forced and unnatural.
And then that Juuji guy is simply weird... it’s okay if he is generous to support his cousin’s one night stand and his child without letting him know because the omega requested so, but he appears to genuinely care about their lives as a good friend. Then, he let them talk it out by dumping the omega at Haruomi’s house at night, without letting he know anything of the situation? What did he expect to happen? “I told him not to touch you” what kind of shit is that. So does he care or doesn’t he? I can’t tell anymore.
Also when Haruomi came over the next morning, he found Senri next to an indoor pond I repeat HE LET A 3-4 YEAR OLD CHILD PLAY ON ITS OWN RIGHT NEXT TO A BODY OF WATER I almost had a heart attack. I’m single and don’t even want kid but I’m decent enough to know that situation SCREAMS DANGER - how can someone entrusts their own child to his care???
There you go. End of my rant. Seriously Senri is the only good thing in this manga and I no longer trust random users’ recommendations anymore lol