Choppy

neonpoop June 20, 2019 12:59 am

I reaaally wanted to like this, but I feel it was a bit rushed and choppy... like why did the younger brother suddenly take his pants off?? It makes no sense! I felt like I was missing a whole scene! And the last story would've been great but I didn't really get the time line for it. Was it before or after the first story?? Ahhhh... I normally love this authors works and I was really looking forward to this, but it was just a bit too choppy for me

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