The author should study more...

The art is cute though

I mean, dude, it has dragons and magic, do we even have logic in these stories? I think not. This may be rude but why do we even need to have CPR logic if we already have a story about dragons and godly creatures?

Well, the character is supposed to be a genius DOCTOR.

Errors like this ruins her character in just the first few panels. First of all you need to try and wake the person up not check the pupils, check the pulse and breathing, if you don't feel and see those, you call for help and start the CPR. This is very BASIC life support.

For those who have no idea will enjoy the story or just let it go but for those who knows then its just spoiled.

Anyway, don’t confuse nonsense with fantasy.

The art is cool though. :)

Surprised you're offending the author but then acknowledging the art to make your rude comments nicer. Just because someone knows or doesn't mean that the entire story is spoiled. Get over a small fact and if you like it. Fine. If you keep offending the author with fact. Get over it. Its a story is still appreciated even if a fact if messed up. The CHARACTER is a genius NOT the person. If you think the person wouldn't mess up, you're wrong so get over a small detail the move on.

Hey chill Hot potato when people make and show their art expect it to be appreciated AND criticized. Criticisms can help people improve, why would you only see the negative side of it? Never got criticized before?

And you don’t have to be a genius to know these medical stuff, just RESEARCH it.

And heyy, you asked a question and I answered it. Why make it sound like I am the one making a lot of fuss bout it? Σ( ￣□￣||)

I didn't mean to be rude, but you're making everything sound rude. If you are trying to criticize it make it something like, "I Enjoy the story but possibly next time, could you double check the facts? On episode --- a fact was wrong, instead it would've meant to be ---" you're honestly making it sound rude. And second of all, when someone confronts you, don't make is person and be rude about it. If I was unintentionally rude, I apologize but you're just also offending someone who enjoys it. Just because I say this doesn't meant hate, "What didn't get criticized before?" I was criticizing you, get over it already so people can actually enjoy the story.

Gosh Hot potato. I don’t know what this is about anymore.

Hey i never intended to offend, just criticize and appreciate the works here. You told me that I was trying to sound nicer by acknowledging the art,but I wasn't trying to be nice. I was being honest and direct about it without beating around the bush.

Anyway, i never had the intention to insult and I dont remember throwing you one. How did I insult you? Arent you getting offended by yourself And making it a personal attack?

Dude. why just butcher someone's name. "Hot potato" isn't exactly the best cut off. And trying to better your explanations are getting kinda annoying

I was honestly just trying to sound nice with many questions but now you're making me sound rude. "nonsense" isn't exactly the best term for a wrong fact

u sound like a troll. what he said about cpr thing isnt very important to the main story itself but it gives us a detail that the character is a GENIUS DOCTOR and KNOWS what she's doing. it's called indirect characterization. it makes us realize "oooh she's a good doctor" or whatever.

Nonsense as in Nonsense Literature.

Well i feel like you're a hot headed person with a passion thus hot potato. Isnt it cute? Hahaha

Def not a troll. Just someone who’d leave a comment on the comments section. Isnt it potato starting a fight?

And you maybe right the CPR isn't very important. Let it pass then. I should change the comment to “the medical logic in this is hilarious. His heart stopped beating, but his pulse is normal.” Haha Satisfied?

How am I a troll? I’m not the one criticizing the author based on a fact.

Look, just because one likes a story it doesn't mean that they can not see silly mistakes.
His criticism has a point in this case. She's supposed to be a doctor (and a good one also), so in a way it's a comic about medicine. The author should've done a bit more researching and look up more about medicine before writing. It's something that makes the sorry more credible. It's as if I want to write a story about music and compositing but I have no clue about what's a music score (￣∇￣")
It's a silly mistake because the author could've been a bit more precise. That's all

That’s actually the first time I find a fight this funny I’m sorry for you instant potatoe but it’s true that hot potatoe fits you better and it’s kinda cute too haha
Anyway I don’t really want to meddle in your funny fight cause it’s none of my business but I really wish to say that I like your way of thinking chowidechan and I agree with your reasoning (you also made my day with the hot potatoe thing )

So glad to make you day with rude name calling and shitty responses!

Well I guess that’s not your real name but your pseudo which is supposed to be original or funny so why not acknowledging the greatness of your idea ? Besides you are the one calling her/his réponse shitty but that’s your own personal opinion which I don’t agree with.. but you both made my day anyway ;)