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Yeah but the poor guy is going to end up with the jerk. Good enough reason to stop reading now.
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Yeah but the poor guy is going to end up with the jerk. Good enough reason to stop reading now.
This is a good example of how to start a bad story... We have here a cool and charming friend and on the other side a spoiled brat ... Who will the reader prefer? 99% will choose the friend ... No matter how much the brat apologizes for the shit he did, it will still get that sense that things are not right.
Just my opinion (〜￣△￣)〜