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true, obey me was like kinda scary kinda funny, it had a supress and emotion flow of feelings and warehouse was just UGHHGGHDJFHDJSJHDCGJKEHJASNFJRBHWNS i literally felt like dying in a pool of blood or even made up thoughts on when tension will actually build up, boohoo he locks me up and shoves shit in my bum and i know him from somewhere and just like a song with a dead beat and liquid boredness poured over the context of it.
Ok, three things:
First, in chapter 8 I think it was, the knife just kinda disappeared... did I miss seme setting it down or is it just gone?
Second, this really is starting to seem like a ripoff of Warehouse... uke has amnesia from high school, handcuffed to a bed, kept in a darkish room..
When I first started reading this I liked it, but now it's not really impressing me. Uke is a victim of abuse but doesn't totally act like it, he's kind of a flat character... Seme is good and weird, though. I like him.
I wanna see where this goes.
Oh, and the third thing was really random but if you picture gyuh wool as female he'd look exactly like me. Seriously this dude is my gender flipped yaoi doppelganger.
I'm positively ~~beautiful~~ (sarcasm).
I mean I make the same facial expressions he does and it's kinda freaking me out. O-O
Yup, sorry for how long this got. :P