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Hollyyyyy June 3, 2019 6:29 am

Ok, three things:

First, in chapter 8 I think it was, the knife just kinda disappeared... did I miss seme setting it down or is it just gone?

Second, this really is starting to seem like a ripoff of Warehouse... uke has amnesia from high school, handcuffed to a bed, kept in a darkish room..
When I first started reading this I liked it, but now it's not really impressing me. Uke is a victim of abuse but doesn't totally act like it, he's kind of a flat character... Seme is good and weird, though. I like him.

I wanna see where this goes.



Oh, and the third thing was really random but if you picture gyuh wool as female he'd look exactly like me. Seriously this dude is my gender flipped yaoi doppelganger.
I'm positively ~~beautiful~~ (sarcasm).
I mean I make the same facial expressions he does and it's kinda freaking me out. O-O

Yup, sorry for how long this got. :P

Responses
    Freeee June 3, 2019 6:06 pm

    Now i want to see a picture of you, god damm it

    kstalkingbj June 3, 2019 10:00 pm

    warehouse kinda dragged it, i stopped reading it because it started to piss me off on how long and boring it just became, like i just stopped out of nowhere, got bored i guess

    Goryfantasy22 June 4, 2019 5:15 am

    can't really compare because (same theme yeah- I love yandere stories) they have two completely different feels. In a writer's pov, warehouse has the impending doom aspect to it, while obey me has a more comedic flow to it

    Goryfantasy22 June 4, 2019 5:17 am

    I honestly prefer obey me as well haha, but other's may prefer the more serious story like warehouse or ks

    kstalkingbj June 4, 2019 11:57 pm
    I honestly prefer obey me as well haha, but other's may prefer the more serious story like warehouse or ks Goryfantasy22

    true, obey me was like kinda scary kinda funny, it had a supress and emotion flow of feelings and warehouse was just UGHHGGHDJFHDJSJHDCGJKEHJASNFJRBHWNS i literally felt like dying in a pool of blood or even made up thoughts on when tension will actually build up, boohoo he locks me up and shoves shit in my bum and i know him from somewhere and just like a song with a dead beat and liquid boredness poured over the context of it.