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if he hadn't been living there long enough to have a neighbor, then he wouldn't know. he could have moved in with that apartment vacant and then it became occupied.
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if he hadn't been living there long enough to have a neighbor, then he wouldn't know. he could have moved in with that apartment vacant and then it became occupied.
These felt too forced. Like in the first one. So the uke's been living there all this time and he's never noticed how thin the walls are?? You'd think that's not something you'd forget if you're planning on masturbating and calling out your next door neighbors name! The least he's could have done was go to the other side of the room, go to another room, or idk...DON'T CALL OUT HIS NAME!!
I know, it's an easy way to push the story along and create a little angst when the seme walked in, but I couldn't help but to get annoyed at the lack of sense.
The first was the worse at this but all of them did it to some extent.