What use is a beautiful art if the story isn't engaging? The flow of the story doesn't help. It feels as if 3 different stories are being compressed in one small chapter at the same time. It's confusing. I feel bad for the author - they have talent but I hope they get better at story-telling.
What use is a beautiful art if the story isn't engaging? The flow of the story doesn't help. It feels as if 3 different stories are being compressed in one small chapter at the same time. It's confusing. I feel bad for the author - they have talent but I hope they get better at story-telling.