I actually quite liked the ending

Pookie April 9, 2019 4:24 pm

The ending was pretty refreshing! Of course I'd love this to be longer. Revenge doesn't always have to be violent. The simple act of defying can have its own weight in revenge.

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    Sachiko April 10, 2019 12:47 pm

    I disagree that defiance in this case carried any of that weight as per what I said to kunxaesth. This kind of 'revenge' is the one I see most often btw.

    Pookie April 10, 2019 3:10 pm
    I disagree that defiance in this case carried any of that weight as per what I said to kunxaesth. This kind of 'revenge' is the one I see most often btw. Sachiko

    And to that I say: to each their own :)