I love the premise of the story and two main leads. However, i think the story needs to be...

I love the premise of the story and two main leads. However, i think the story needs to be told in more details. It needs to be longer to build up the background information clearly and tells the story step by step. The whole thing with father and new family comes out of nowhere without any background information and build up. Other than that, i love the concept of the plot and art.