Ugh Review

LavenderOkamari March 22, 2019 6:11 pm

Okay... dropping this...
the dialogue is childish and not original and the plot is just slapped together without any significant meaning being the scenes whatsoever... there is little character development and I don’t really understand the world the author is trying to portray. The pace is bad and the knowledge of the industry seems vague and unimportant...
I thought it might have some potential but got really turned off after a while... it seems to be a bad replication and combination of Skip Beat, The Origin of Love, and Raising a Bat.
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Responses
    Tovah March 22, 2019 11:54 pm

    Couldn't agree more. I'm gonna try it for some longer but I'm not really enjoying this as much as I want to

    Mixtress Bathory April 1, 2019 6:54 pm

    this is not for people who take yaoi stories too seriously. pretty much a sarcastic parody. only needs good sense of humor and sarcasm

    Tovah April 1, 2019 10:14 pm
    this is not for people who take yaoi stories too seriously. pretty much a sarcastic parody. only needs good sense of humor and sarcasm Mixtress Bathory

    Well I don't think it is particularly funny ( ̄へ ̄)

    LavenderOkamari April 1, 2019 11:03 pm
    this is not for people who take yaoi stories too seriously. pretty much a sarcastic parody. only needs good sense of humor and sarcasm Mixtress Bathory

    It’s not that I take it too seriously or not, but I’m more disappointed in the fact that any story should be authentic and at least try to catch the readers attention, and this story did not, I could not be involved or invested in the characters or the plot, it held no charm or originality. Which might be fine with some readers, but others might want an honest review, thus, my comment above.

    LavenderOkamari April 1, 2019 11:05 pm
    Well I don't think it is particularly funny ( ̄へ ̄) Tovah

    I agree, this was not funny at all. If you want humor @MixtressBathory I suggest you look and read “Oh Holy”/“Oh Jesus”, that’s humor and sarcasm.

    Mixtress Bathory April 2, 2019 1:35 am
    It’s not that I take it too seriously or not, but I’m more disappointed in the fact that any story should be authentic and at least try to catch the readers attention, and this story did not, I could not be... LavenderOkamari

    do realize there are authors who do write for themselves instead of other people?! there are authors who simply make fun of certain genres. and they know very well people will complain. this author clearly aren't giving what readers look for and making a parody of it. from the first chapter you can see that.

    LavenderOkamari April 2, 2019 1:53 am
    do realize there are authors who do write for themselves instead of other people?! there are authors who simply make fun of certain genres. and they know very well people will complain. this author clearly aren... Mixtress Bathory

    If they write/draw for themselves then why post it online?
    Just something to think about.

    I’m not necessarily complaining, please understand, i felt obliged to give a review and critique of my own. Whether you agree or disagree is in your right, as is mine, to give a good or a bad review.
    I believe I have been honest.

    Tovah April 2, 2019 8:12 am
    do realize there are authors who do write for themselves instead of other people?! there are authors who simply make fun of certain genres. and they know very well people will complain. this author clearly aren... Mixtress Bathory

    Artists are allowed to write anything they want, doesn't mean I have to like it.