Unusual Question

Mar March 20, 2019 5:01 pm

I know this is basically a Yaoi site but maybe not the best place but Hi im Mar and Im a 17 year old Marketingstudent from The Netherlands. We( my group and I) have gotten this assignment to make our own website ( yea its ugly we aren’t doing a Design study or anything) and to get as much traffic as possible aka visitors ( the best if you are from Germany! Since we get graded on that the most But all countries are good).

So my question is if you could click on our site https://deco-markers.com
And be on it for a minute!

We sell Textile and Porcelain Markesr. But lmao you dont have to buy anything ( ̄∇ ̄") since it’s euros and Delivery costs probably be €100000

If you have any tips for our site tell me!

Responses
    Darkenthat March 20, 2019 5:11 pm

    Aight ok

    Amethyst March 20, 2019 5:36 pm

    You can make the page(?) More interesting . Very few products... There should be more products even for window shopping!

    ғᴜᴄᴄɪ™ March 20, 2019 6:04 pm

    sure

    Lilac~Sama Σ੧(❛□❛✿) March 20, 2019 6:18 pm

    Instead of having a white background, try and do it so it’s like on a desk or something, like how some shops (for example kokopie) show their products

    Lilac~Sama Σ੧(❛□❛✿) March 20, 2019 6:19 pm
    Instead of having a white background, try and do it so it’s like on a desk or something, like how some shops (for example kokopie) show their products Lilac~Sama Σ੧(❛□❛✿)

    ((The product))

    Layla March 20, 2019 6:23 pm

    Hay i found little mistakes like :
    -It's not "dem Wunschzettel" its "den Wunschzettel"

    -its not "hinzufugen" it's "hinzufügen"

    it's not "Eigenschappen" its "Eigenschaften"

    Maybe you should put more pictures.
    And I think the colour of the homepage should change to something that is more Professional like black and white.
    ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    shining_stars March 20, 2019 7:13 pm
    Instead of having a white background, try and do it so it’s like on a desk or something, like how some shops (for example kokopie) show their products Lilac~Sama Σ੧(❛□❛✿)

    that's a really good idea. keep in mind that having the same background for all your products is important as well. i also want to say that there should be a zoom feature for each of the products - when you click on a product, you would expect it to zoom in but it does not. having zoom would help your customers greatly. this is minor, but you could also look into changing the font (there's nothing wrong with the standard looking font, but having a different font can make you look unique). overall, the website looks awesome! hope you do well on your project! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

    Mar March 20, 2019 8:34 pm
    You can make the page(?) More interesting . Very few products... There should be more products even for window shopping! Amethyst

    That’s true, but we needed to focus on a Target Group! Like Young People, offices or Families. And how more how more we needed to translate into German. But thank you(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Mar March 20, 2019 8:39 pm
    Instead of having a white background, try and do it so it’s like on a desk or something, like how some shops (for example kokopie) show their products Lilac~Sama Σ੧(❛□❛✿)

    Never heard of kokopie but Its a really good idea! But sadly we dont own the markers ourself so we can’t really make cool pictures! Google probably has something we can use tho(⌒▽⌒)

    Mar March 20, 2019 8:44 pm
    Hay i found little mistakes like :-It's not "dem Wunschzettel" its "den Wunschzettel"-its not "hinzufugen" it's "hinzufügen"it's not "Eigenschappen" its "Eigenschaften"Maybe you should put more pictures.And I... Layla

    Oof excuse use for having bad German skills :( but Thanks I will ask my Group mate to change it, thank you!! We probably will change into white when we figure out how

    Mar March 20, 2019 8:48 pm
    that's a really good idea. keep in mind that having the same background for all your products is important as well. i also want to say that there should be a zoom feature for each of the products - when you cli... shining_stars

    That’s really some detail and handy tips .
    But Im not sure if we can do the zoom on the pictures!! But ill ask my team mates. Im not that technical enough ( ̄∇ ̄")
    But We could change the Font and maybe even the size so Thanks for that one! I haven’t even thought of it

    Hazuki Jin March 20, 2019 9:13 pm

    To add some corrections:
    Instead of....correct would be...
    "Actionsmodelle" --> "Aktionsmodelle"
    "Sozialen Medien" --> Soziale Medien"
    "Wishlist" --> "Wunschliste" or "Merkliste"
    "unsere Team" --> "Unser Team"

    Otherwise you should decide whether you use capital letters to start a menu point or not. The names of articles should be in German, too. Pictures of articles should have all the same size with same background size, that way it will look a bit better and more professional. The description of articles should also be translated. The colour of price should be a less aggressive colour (like blue, grey, black..) and you could use red only for sales and such.

    I hope this helps and all the best for your studies. Your neighbour from Aachen :D

    Mar March 21, 2019 7:30 pm
    To add some corrections:Instead of....correct would be..."Actionsmodelle" --> "Aktionsmodelle""Sozialen Medien" --> Soziale Medien""Wishlist" --> "Wunschliste" or "Merkliste""unsere Team" --> "Unser... Hazuki Jin

    I will Change the errors thanks alot. 4 years of German and I still suck