Weak plot

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The mangaká wasn't able to make me emotionally invested in the story. I honestly don't give a fuck if the uke is going to kill himself or not. Also, I'm not buying the main couple too, I kinda don't care if the seme will be able to save the uke or not. There is not a single build up. How can we understand and care about this so deep love for the sensei if the mangaka hasn't showed us nothing about their relationship or why he is so important for the uke. If it's just because he feels guilty for what happened to him... very shallow reason to kill himself.

How can we root for the seme if his love for the uke makes zero sense? Just because he was crying and sad and had green eyes he falled in love with him? That's BS. All they do is have sex and the seme acts more like a stalker than someone that is in love or worried about the uke. Besides, what happened in the last three years? What is the dynamic of their relationship? So many plot points are unexplained or left for us to fill it ourselves.

And the uke clearly doesn't love the seme. This manga has to end in tragedy because if the uke suddenly realizes that he is in love with the seme and decides to stop with his plan and keep on living... that will make zero sense without a good build up. Honestly, it's a really weak storytelling, the art is pretty and the sex scenes are ok. But the plot is senseless and undeveloped. I'm really pissed because the first chapter had some potential, but this will probably end with tragedy with the seme ending up a mess or with the seme "saving" the uke through "love" and making him change his mind about dying. Anyway, I hope the people that are enjoying this manga don't hate on me for being disappointed (╯°Д °)╯╧╧