What a half axxd plot

PlumpSprouts April 30, 2019 1:19 am

( sorry but not sorry for the long text, Used numbers to separate my thoughts )

If you enjoy this story debate me why its a good story, cause there is very little substance

"Story quality"
1.) If the author wanted to draw porn just draw porn I think that would have been better then this shtt excuse of a story, I only wanted to keep reading for him to turn into a guy and be free, but I that'll never happen.

"Love"
2.) Besides his "love" just lust that is all, teens controlled by lust, no respect for each other, it took him sobbing to get the other get it reconsider maybe for a second and then continued.

(not to mention that he was trying to get he one he "loved" chained to him with pregnancy)

"Fiction, yes"
3.) Also I am aware this is a fictional story to feed into peoples fetishes, but how insecure do you haft to be to find this type steaming pile of crap enjoyable, yet again the people that read this and enjoy it probably just jerk off and could care less about matter of the plot.

"Wasted Time"
4.) Never the less its fiction people do what they will like, just blowing off steam to feel like I total didn't just waste my time

"Whats gonna happen"
5.) Anyway gonna make a guess he doesn't turn back cause he "llloveves him" or something on the lines of that, it wouldn't surprise me if the dude finds out hes trying to turn back and forces him to stay a girl, not like he cared about his own pursuit of happiness, cause me "liky so I do whatever it takes to keep you"

5 1/2.) Next thing you know he pulls a killing stalking and chains him in that basement, he already tied him up multiple times, not like that thought is so outrageous

6.) A moment of silence for the time I spent on this story... #-.-)

Responses
    Kisaki February 28, 2019 10:31 pm

    Thank you. I didn't even finish the first chapter because I was so annoyed, so I went to the comments to see what's up with the story. Now thanks to you I don't have to waste my time (●'◡'●)ノ

    PlumpSprouts February 28, 2019 10:57 pm

    * author

    Pug life March 7, 2019 10:22 am

    Well, people have different likes. Some may like rock music and some may like classic music. Similar to this issue, some may like this type of story and some dont. So honestly, I myself dont care if people are passionate about yaoi even if I'm not. The story is interesting in a way because it shows many psychological factors, as seen through the perception of the main character. But hey if you dont like it why bother waste your time right? It's not child porn and at the same time its considered to be a fetish and enjoyment for people. So let people enjoy their reading I guess ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    ғᴜᴄᴄɪ™ March 13, 2019 5:43 pm

    i agree i hoped he would turn back but nahh#-.-)

    mellowbread April 22, 2019 6:29 pm

    And the "ok rule" with rape in this kind of manga. (And Yaoi) repulse me like hell.

    The worst is that everyone think it's normal. And the protagonist end up in lovee with his/her rapist most of the time. Like WTF. I hate it.