Please don't hate me. I loved the story but it seemed a bit rushed. Like the author got ti...

KatyLarkspur February 28, 2019 5:38 pm

Please don't hate me. I loved the story but it seemed a bit rushed. Like the author got tired of writing it at some point and just rushed for an ending. I would have liked a little more.

Responses
    Miria-chan February 28, 2019 5:41 pm

    I couldn't agree more
    Maybe he/she has nothing else to write

    Cc3551 February 28, 2019 6:45 pm

    I thought the exact thing!

    Krixanne February 28, 2019 6:53 pm

    Tbh, the reason why i love this story is because its very rare to see an alphaxalpha in a omegaverse genre but your right, the ending lacks something. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
    I would've rated it higher if its not for the ending.

    Mameiha February 28, 2019 7:34 pm

    There is nothing to hate in your comment. Not only do I share your opinion, I also think that it is important as readers that we look at not only how "cute" a story is, but how well it is written and conveyed. A wonderful story can be lost when it is rushed or poorly written. For instance, I was impressed by how the mother-in-law was portrayed. I hated her and couldn't hate her at the same time. She felt like a genuine, real life mother-in-law! LOL That takes storytelling talent. I am also privy to some of the inner workings of the manga industry because I have a friend who is a mangaka. That helps me understand rushed endings, awkwardly written plots by authors who are uncomfortable with a genre or theme and the pressures mangaka face to complete a story in a set number of chapters. Editors are a special breed. LOL

    Blubeagle March 5, 2019 1:18 pm
    There is nothing to hate in your comment. Not only do I share your opinion, I also think that it is important as readers that we look at not only how "cute" a story is, but how well it is written and conveyed. ... Mameiha

    Agreed.