
Yeah, I agree. In Therapy Game things seem a bit more "natural" (Minato seems to genuinly enjoy being bottom and Shizuma is a total power top), whereas in her first series Sensei used a few more typical Yaoi clichés, which is sad since I think she made really good characters who are not your average stereotypes otherwise.

Well let me tell you something this is actually natural too. Cause if you think of it the difference between this uke & Minato is that Minato was already gay & had more experience with men before he started his romance Shizuma, but this Shouhei it was his first man & as a sister of a gay guy i can tell you that this happen to him, even though almost all his life he dated girls, he never had sexual relations with them & when he finally had his first boyfriend & he was the bottom, he was curios about top even though for society he looks totally like a stereotype bottom but it's not like he doesn't enjoy or something... And belive me even though i love yaoi, sometimes it's a little bit too much wierd when my brother tell me his experiences cause it's not like i want to imagine him at all lol ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

Oh, I'm totally on the same page with you! What i meant was actually Itsukis character in that context - he's has a really interesting personality overall, but in that regard he is a stereotype Seme, who doesn't want to be topped, period.
On the other hand, i think she portrayed Shouhei beautifully as both an adult but also somewhat inexperienced and especially naive lover. My critique was meant for Itsuki, sorry, might have worded it wrongly ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

ahhh....but that too is a real thing. There are many gay men I have met who simply refuses to bottom or refuses to top. It's nothing to do with ego, it's more like the type of pleasure you choose to have in bed, or the type of dynamics you prefer in bed. Long term partners have this kind of issue as well.
I liked it until that side part where the seme wouldn’t let the Uke top. I mean, why not? There’s nothing demeaning about being bottom, and even if you aren’t Interested there are better ways to go about explaining that than manipulation. Otherwise it was good.