Like always previous translations are on my profile under topics/activity/likes. :)
Excellent translation. As allways thank you so much. I think most reader know BJ stands for Boy Jockey but I always read it as Blow Job since DG has never gotten one.
You're pretty good at writing, u could write fanfics ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Thank you for the trouble, but most of all I freaking love your little side notes.
Thank you for taking the time to write the thorough description! It prob must have taken a while, so many thanks!
MILLIONS OF TKS HUN Geez I was reading your translation and fallowing the panel in Korean and I was blushing so hard.....even at my age.... OMG!!!! I always love your translations and if someone here said that is not good... Well I will beat them for sure!!!! IT WAS PURE EXTASY FOR ME!!!!! Thank you soooo much for the bottom of my HEART I love Ya
Hi, A bit that is missed out, and is likely going to be missed out in the lez. eng translation is
- The scene where Jiwon puts his head on DG's chest he says
- "Hah.... ssi'. 'ssi" is a Korean honorific maybe equivalent to the Japanese san, meaning it comes with the name. Jiwon was so flustered that he didn't say 'Dong-gyun ssi' he just said 'ssi'. It would be equivalent to a character called "Sakura" not being called Sakura san but just san, lol. I thought that was quite an important and funny detail, but no other translators have included it, and Lezhin does not include such honorifics in their translation, which misses out a lot of the tone and humour of the characters (they do love their oppas and hyungs though lol.
Thank you very much.
Yeah. I caught that, but the majority of people would have it fly over their heads. XD in the English translation they'll probably translate it as "sigh...damn" or "ahh...damnit" simply because those are colloquials people are used to XD the translator purposely leave it out and use different colloquial based om their audience so they can have an easier time reading :) they may use "ah...hyun..." Like the last part of his name but Idk. Lol. It's unfortunate but many would probably wonder what -ssi is for a sec and be taken out of the moment while reading. :O all about the suspense (づ￣ ³￣)づ haha
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Thanks so much ^.^
Haha i was blushing writing the translation.
"He grabs his ...dick" *blush myself* LOL
Also had to think of which word for penis to use and that alone had me blushing LOL even at my age as well haha
I appreciate the comment. Thanks ^.^
You're welcome ^.^ glad it was a hit ^.^
You're welcome :D
And thank you for the compliments especially to my side notes XD
I thought they may be a miss but i just had to get my thoughts out there. Glad people like yourself have been enjoying them ^.^
Oh shucks ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ Idk about that XD but thank you ^.^ glad this chapter was a hit. So hard to write description to pictures hehe
Haha that was like reading a fanfiction.
Great job, you should think of making a fic :)
You're welcome. :D and thank you ^.^
Maybe we can look forward to that next chapter XD
But either way i still want to know what is going to happen with the stream. Live stream blowjob HAHA imagine LOL
Thanks ^.^
I'm glad it was readable.
Didn't think i was capable of fic writing XD
Thank you so much! Your translations are amazing, especially the descriptions that are totally the same to the comic (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Thank you so much!!!
Hehehehehe!!! You deserve it hun
Your details was AWSOME hehehehe!!!!
If you have time you should start a blog or a personnal page Private and accept only the people who love ya translation!!!!! Just an idea like that.
Can't wait for next friday.... what will they do????!!!! Soooo curious to know!!!!
****very exited here***** for next chapters
omg. thanks so much for translating the raws! sometimes i dont wait so much for the translated chapter here coz i've already read it from yours. and i'm not demanding but would you please be so kind as to translate chap 62? hahahaha its hard to wait another week when the raws look promising. even more promising than my future. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Well semi full. It's a sex scene. hard to translate pictures. Easier to translate text but i tried my best. XD
Ch 61 translation:
--narration--
"dialogue"
'thoughts'
*scene/emotion description*
*panel of Jiwon's apartment complex with only his lights on*
*next panel showing them sloppily getting off their shoes in the hyeongwan* (T/N: genkan in japanese, it's the first area of the house where shoes are meant to be taken off before entering)
*panel showing Jiwon licking DG's lips and making out with him, zoomed in shot of their mouths*
*zoom out we see Jiwon wrapping his arms around DG's waist and head pulling him in and making out with him*
"ah.."
"mmm"
*next panel shows jiwon rubbing his leg on DG's crotch (T/N: still clothed XD)*
"mmph"
"AH..!"
*they stop making out for a second and stare at each other. Each of them flushed red*
"....."
Jiwon: *looking at DG flushed red and sweatdrop* "Nam Donggyun..."
"Are you okay with this? Do you want to do this?"
DG: ".....!" *badump badump*
*puts his arms around Jiwon's neck and slightly collapses his head embarrased and brightening red and getting more flushed face*
"...Is there...a reason not to?" *Flares up in blush* (T/N: lol my english is poor XD)
Jiwon: *looking down at an embarrased DG* "!"
*panel where we see DG's legs being elevated off the floor*
DG: "uwaaah!"
*zooms out we see Jiwon picking up DG, having him in his arms, and walking off to the bedroom as he's lifting DG in his arms*
DG: "Sunbae! I-I can walk myself!"
*fidgeting around*
"Sunbae!"
*jiwon still carrying on*
"...."
*******BJ ALEX LOGO*******
CH 61
*DG's lying on the bed with a buttoned down shirt and in his briefs while Jiwon is sitting next to him slowly working his way over him and they're making out*
"mmph"
"ah"
*jiwon is pulling off his shirt while DG is lying on the bed*
*panel of jiwon finishing off taking off his shirt*
*zoomed in on Jiwon's face staring at DG.* *badump* *blushing*
*panel of DG staring back at him. Blushing* *badump badump*
*Jiwon moves closer and wraps his arm around DG's shoulder and brings him in towards him for another kiss*
*panel then shows DG's shirt being unbuttoned by Jiwon*
*panel shot of DG with his shirt open and in his briefs looking enticing for jiwon ;) *
DG: "ah.." *embarrased*
Jiwon: "....." *staring in complete awe, eyes widen* *badump badump*
*jiwon collapses onto DG's chest and is burning up in blushing. Steam*
Jiwon: "Ugh damnit... *murmurs* I want to do it already" *hugging DG while hiding his face and trying to hold back*
*DG becomes even brighter red and blushes mad hard. Surprised*
*zoomed out and Jiwon is off DG just looking and waiting there on the bed while DG is slowly taking off his briefs and shirt*
DG: "I-I...it's been awhile already since..."
*badump badump*
*him turning his lower half around now completely naked and enticing him by having his hand on his ass and gesturing and posing shyly seductive*
"just do it in a way it doesn't hurt much..."
*badump badump*
*panel showing Jiwon snapping* (T/N: might as well add a nosebleed LOL)
Jiwon: "....."
*next panels show moments later*
*panel of lube*
"hah...ah" "AH!"
*zoomed POV shot of DG's ass being loosened up by Jiwon. Jiwon's pants are now off*
"Ngh. AH MMPH..!!"
*zoomed out we see Jiwon with his arms wrapped around DG, one hand loosening him up and the other holding him close as he licks and sucks on his nipple*
*DG is trembling*
DG: "Ah, sunbae....AH!" "W-wait.." "AH!"
*panel of Jiwon slowly taking his mouth of DG's nipple as he looks at DG's face of estasy*
"Agh, ah"
*Jiwon begins kissing his neck*
*DG surprised and flinching* "Ugh, Ah"*
*zoomed in on the neck we see a mark left there ;)*
Jiwon: *talking into DG's ear as he's still fingering him* "A lot of time has passed, but I loosened you up well so it won't hurt now"
DG: "Ah, y-yeah it's fine..."
*panel showing DG shaking and trembling more*
*panel showing Jiwon taking out his fingers*
*Jiwon gently kisses DG on his cheek. DG's face is bright red and in esctasy*
DG: "!!"
*Jiwon on top of DG looking at him and DG still trembling looking back at him glossy eyed*
Jiwon: "Nam Donggyun, honestly, do you want to do it?"
*panel of DG's eyes beginning to whell up. face bright red heavy breathing*
DG: "....."
*panel of DG's hand reaching for Jiwon's dick*
*grabs his dick and brings it towards his ass suggesting he stick it in*
DG: *hand still on his dick bringing it closer inside him* *zoomed out shot we see DG covering his face being shy with his legs spread open* "It's...It's okay, hurry..."
*next panel we see Jiwon bright red biting his lip and can't hold back any longer*
Jiwon: "ugh!"
*jiwon then trusts inside*
DG: *shaking* "AH!!!"
*zoomed in on Jiwon's face gasping, bright red, slightly shaking. Looking at DG *
*panel zoomed in on the action showing jiwon moving and thrusting*
Jiwon: "it's completely....like the first time."
DG: "Ah.. AH!"
*zoomed in on jiwon's head next to DG's as he's thrusting even harder*
DG: "UGH!" *flinching, shaking*
*zoomed out. Jiwon picks up his head, DG wraps his arm around Jiwon's back slightly clawing his back*
DG: "ah... ugh!" *DG tearing up*
Jiwon: "is it too rough?"
DG: "No..no it's not that..."
*DG smiling as he stares into Jiwon's face*
"they're tears of happiness"
*Jiwon's eyes widen and he's surprised, blushing*
*Jiwon carresses DG's face*
Jiwon: "...I see now." *smiles*
*next panel Jiwon begins to lift DG's legs and begins to thrust into him even harder*
DG: "W-wait...!" "If you do ...it like th- UGH!"
"AH!"
*panel of DG's face in pure esctasy. about to climax*
DG: "i-if you thrust like...AGH...!!!" "HNGH UGH!"
*shake* *thrust* shake* thrust*
*jiwon then huddles over DG and thrusts deep into DG's ass*
*shake thrust*
DG: "AH!" "Su-sunbae...!!" "NGH!" *trembling*
Jiwon: "Ugh..."
*panel shows DG came all over his chest* *heavy breathing* *cool down*
*panel showing Jiwon taking out his dick. DG's ass dripping with his load*
*panel showing them staring at each other heavy panting*
DG: "Sunbae..." *staring into Jiwon's face reaching up to his face*
*panel of DG interlocking his hand with Jiwon's hand*
DG: "I love you..."
*panel showing Jiwon bending his head down to kiss DG*
DG: "Mmph..!" *taken aback* (T/N: wasn't expecting a kiss)
*panel showing jiwon tightening the grip on their interlocking hands*
*last panel zoomed out aerial type shot overlooking them on the bed Jiwon still on top of DG*
*badump badump*
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WOW! it's harder to translate sfx and chapters with no dialogue LOL.
This chapter was obviously a sexy-time chapter XD
Hope I did it justice.
I also hope this story continues past them getting back together. I want to see their life afterwards. Maybe Jiwon struggling because he doesn't know what it's like to be in a relationship or how to properly treat DG. I can see that. Or them discussing what is their relationship now. and what about the stream! lmao.
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Oh and side note: BJ alex means broadcasting jockey alex. that's what BJ means in south korea. Not...well...blowjob. just a side note for anyone wondering or confused or still thinks it's blowjob. lol