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it's not about grammar it's about the conversation between the characters i mean the plot could be better. I don’t care about grammar mistakes, I don’t even see them, English is not my mother tongue. Sorry about that, im really gratful about the work it takes to updates all this stories.I’m sorry obviously i didn’t seem clear in what I wanted to say.(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
The dialogue between the characters is not very god, it's an embarrassing pain to read it. It's a shame since the art is really great.