well if its me, if i would to rewrite this story..i would change this MC weak personality to become more badass women. instead of being afraid of the prince she should hate him and be more better person then him. after years of training to become a knight she became more strong, wise and beauty. she grew together beside the green guy and they finally fall in love and wanted to get married but she was still engaged with the prince and soon became 16. while the red hair guy train her, he fall for her sincere, hardworking and beauty lady she became, but he suppress his feelings (bc red hair boy is Tsundere). Oneday, the king invited everyone for an event to celebrate the prince and MC soon to be bride). so that where she tell the king in front of the prince and everyone saying that she don't want to marry the prince because she want to become a knight to follow her father footstep. she also said she doesn't need a prince to become a queen, because she is the queen. so she tell a bit lie and a bit truth story to the king saying she been blessed by god because she came from the future and cant be married to the prince because she is a goddess who must protect this country, also the prince will one day married to black hair girl. so the ending is everyone happy, the prince married the black hair girl (also resolve his lovehate feelings towards MC), the mc had her wedding with the green hair guy. the red hair guy became the royal captain knight. the green hair guy replace his father became a minister. the MC became a goddess help the prince (who recently became a king) how to make a wise decision for the country (bc she a goddess) the three of them serve the blue hair guy. THE END.
so yeah thanks for reading my Looong idea story. inspired by "light and shadow"manga (u can search that, it really good story)
yes it does feel a bit like doctor elise but she is way more mature then the MC, the mc is weak, she not mature enough to fight her own fear like every time she meet the blue boy she get pale, sick or cry. i want her to be more fierce like akatsuki no yona and yeah people keep commenting that the MC gonna end up having the same fate which makes me lose interest to read more, but i keep reading this idk why but maybe bc im a masochist hahaha..i know im gonna end up hating it but i curious too.. i only read the raw but i dont really understand it. i really like the drawing.
yAS that was a smart choice. tbh i rlly don’t want to the manga to end like the novel bc the prince is such a shitty person. if i was to rewrite it, i would want the prince to fall in love with the other girl from the other dimension, learn and change his ways bc of the power of love (ik its cheesy lmao but what I can say? i prefer this story line djjdjd) and be with the her. the mc can fall in love the green haired boy. i don’t think many would like it bc of his evil intentions, but i fucKING KNOW hes gonna fall in love and it’s cute. it might be the most fluffy starting relationship...bUT I like it