I had a feeling that black hair girl was a player (kissing someone and then accepting another person's confession; short hair girl surprised at black hair girl's action; short hair girl warning long haired girl that black hair girl is popular and her love can't be contained to one person; black hair girl not liking long hair girl's previous appearance). But she was so handsome that I sort of ignored the warning signs, and thought I was probably thinking too much. Thank goodness someone else agrees. In the end, I'm just happy that our protagonist didn't get together with either of them, a superficial crush that ended with a kiss and an obsessive yandere wannabe.
Oh this isn't a oneshot. Hold my complaints on pending then.
What a dumb fucking comment, my head hurts just by reading this.
Wow nice argument against my points.
Also now that this series actually did end (at chapter 3) I unhold my complaints. They all still ring true. More true than before I would say.
Sorry I was just being an asshole, but still think the comment is stupid. Sometimes people are really edgy, sometimes people are thots . Idk how wouldn't be believable that someone could say and do really edgy things or someone could be a thot and kiss every cute they see.
I didn't like this story. Long haired girl was too edgy to be believable, black haired girl was too much of a thot to be believable, and short light haired girl... Actually I'm fine with her. Overall though, very dumb story. Maybe if it was more than a oneshot it could've been good, but I don't think so considering the ending. Long haired girl has an unhealthy obsession with black haired girl, and I can only see them becoming an item as being a bad thing for that (especially considering the aforementioned thot nature of black haired girl). What she needs are more friends to help with her abandonment issues.