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There's no way this will end as a tragedy in the last chapter and then spin off to another couple. The tone isn't there at all.

i didn't say that will finish bad but i don't think that the family will be very comprehensive :/ i have said this :)

Doesn't tragedy mean exactly that? That it will end badly? Anything outside the story is... outside it, so if you assume bad things happen after the last chapter, that's not a tragedy, that's fanfiction. And I don't quite understand what you mean by comprehensive. Understanding? If you meant that Dojin's family will not be understanding... From a storytelling point it would make little sense to introduce that much conflict in the last chapter and leave it unresolved. So I assume they will be at least somewhat tolerant if not supportive.

Throwing it out there but with how “outta left field” the story can get, Dojin, Hyesung and baby could all die in a freak accident next chapter.

(To be clear, I like this story and do NOT want that to happen, it just popped into my little sadistic mind and I was compelled to share)

I'm not sure there have been any truly out of the blue twists? Like maybe I couldn't predict it exactly, but all the major conflicts have been there from the beginning.

Like Hyuesung, who appears to be the most random, is actually pretty consistent: he has bad trust issues caused by bad parents, he has half-fended for himself but has been just sheltered enough that he doesn't quite know a bad situation before he walks into it and he clearly prefers relationship based on monetary or otherwise mutually beneficial trades rather than on affection and love, pretty much because of the aforementioned trust issues. So any time he has messed up it's because he's been running towards money and/or away from affection.

Dojin has never felt that much attachment, but he's much more secure and confident so he does the opposite and pushes hard to get that love, but he's inexperienced and can falter.

And Heeso thinks he's an impartial outsider who can fix things while he's actually really subjective and opinionated.

Those personalities clashing or working together have consistently driven the story. With the main conflict pretty much solved (Hyuesung has decided to give the chance to having a loving family), a random car crash would not be a meaningful way to end this. It's possible. But unlikely from a narrative perspective.

Wow trippy, I was thinking “car accident” being the tragedy but didn’t write it haha.
Probably twist wasn’t the right concept, yeah this story is pretty by the numbers, I meant the author has a habit of on jump the plot to the resolution, the bit with Heeso and Hyesung for example. That was resolved quicker than I expected.
But saying that, that out look could be due to the comment section, you’re reading others theories and opinions dayily while waiting for the next chapter, it’s bound to make you think the story will go a different way and when it doesn’t it weird. (Some get really riled up about it too)
But focusing only on the story, there is a pattern. I just think the author was trying to go for comedy with emotional scenes but got too deep with the feels.
Still, it’s a good read

yeah i mean understanding,because his family is composed of all alpha so they may have prejudices against the omega. as he had at the beginning. And i repeat, no i didn't mean that it will finish bad but given all the problems that have had and the general situation that has pervaded the manga, I'm afraid that just something else can badly, but of course I do not want it to end badly, I want a truly happy ending ahaha I expressed my opinion that's all u.u

And I respectfully disagreed. I'm not trying to start a fight. What is it with the comment section on this page that people immediately go "just my opinion, don't talk to me"? If you express an opinion on a public forum, of course I can discuss it with you. That's why you said it, isn't it?

And I respectfully disagreed. I'm not trying to start a fight. What is it with the comment section on this page that people immediately go "just my opinion, don't talk to me"? If you express an opinion on a public forum, of course I can discuss it with you. That's why you said it, isn't it?

Based on this comment section... Every reader has a different level of reading comprehension when it comes to tone and narrative. Also knowing the workings of the medium is good. These webtoons are usually very dramatic with extreme reactions (compared to manga, which is rarely realistic but the emotions expressed aren't as wild).

The most common things I see with webtoon couples is a pushy/clingy/overly-attached rich, handsome seme-type combined with a very disinterested/naive/avoidant ordinary uke-type. They often start off disliking each other, with the seme flipping first and becoming extremely interested and maybe even abusive. Then very heightened drama happens and suddenly the uke, who previously disliked the seme, is quick to fall in love.

I think I haven't seen a webtoon where a slow-build up drama hasn't been solved in a very unsatisfying fashion in a chapter or two without actually realizing the full weight of the stuff that went down. Apparently publishers like Lehzin also cut stories short ("finish this up in 5 chapters"), which combined with the weekly publishing schedule leads to these hiccups in storytelling.

Knowing all of that, with what I mentioned earlier about the characters, this story seems very typical. I have liked reading it, but it has problems to spare.

of course i didn't say that you can't discuss or that i don't want you to talk to me :) i didn't want to start a fight u.u you have your thought and i have mine ok? i wanted express my self with people that loves yaoi like me because i can't with my friend, they do not care about this stuff ahaha

Most Webtoons have the same tropes, end the same way, etc. It’s why I wonder the comment section even has arguments. We all know what’s going to happen. But it’s what the majority wants I guess, still in leads to other authors wanting to “spice up” and/or “make a twist” which, if done right, end up pretty good. Harada (manga artist) is a good example of that.

Oh boy, that drama with Lezhin is a whole other can of worms in my book. So many promising stories got rear ended because of it. They were rushed, had corners cut and plot issues were never addressed. “What Lies at the End” is a prime example of it. I feel bad for the authors.

This has been a good conversation. I appreciate you for having it with me.

Likewise :)
Have a good one