Am I the only

Tracki12 September 27, 2018 7:37 pm

...who is completely comfused as to the details of Tsubame's past. I get he was abadoned and saddled with a debt. But I feel like the author jumped around to much. I just felt like this lacked properly pacing and explanation of some understanding all characters had but the reader missed.

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    ♥Kitten♥ September 29, 2018 9:31 pm

    Yeah.... the background story of the characters wasn't very clear... also I feel like some of the story was a bit robotic and... ya know planned?
    Perhaps the author could have made it more natural and a bit longer...idk...