The cat girl is annoying? You mean being killed by the person you love should not be treated as something bad but something good, instead. Weirdo. Also, 'jumping from one storyline to the next', as you put it, means you are unable to read even simplistic stories, since even I understand the storyline very well. And there is no jumping around, at all. Oops. Ktbn.
Look at you! Such a lovely thing to say to someone you don't know over the internet. I'm sure you can take some time to notice a lot of people have commented now they are having a hard time following the story. It jumps around and the writing isn't very good, as in the tone and flow just jump a lot. It's a critique I am giving here, because the comment you decided to rudely respond to, is in fact, right.
So, OP you're right this story is confusing and all over the place.
Wow she/he never mention about how the character should felt tho? This person only mention about how annoying the character, and i think its something normal to say so, think that you are the weirdo here...
And i agree with these people the story does jump around and its confusing.. it just that you are overreacting..lol
I am giving a critique too. So only victim blamers can give critiques. Calling other people names is much worse than victim blaming. Gotcha.
Plus, I have something very similar to autism which makes it difficult for me to follow complicated storylines. But I can follow this one. There's a REASON I said "Even I" after all.
Ktbn.
I... haven't even started reading this yet... Just lurking in the comments section (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
BUT, the girl basically called corpse stupid... several times. How is that not rude ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ critiques should be on the subject itself and NOT directed at another person, completely unrelated.
Corpse never said she didn't like the series, nor did she spout offensive words back. She merely defended her opinion and quite logically I might add.
The art work is amazing, the plot is good.. but the story line is soooo confusing.. its seem like being told by drunkard ,jump from one to others.. dunno how the story will go i stop at chapter 10, the cat girl is annoying.. how could you guys keep reading this?