Why was it crappy? Can you do better? HA! This I would LOVE to seeヾ(☆▽☆)
Even if it was immensely crappy...U don't have to say that way... Kinda looks bad
this sint a valid criticism i think its beautiful and the story is really nice idk what ur on
You're right!
Its not crappy, though it has alot of room for improvement. Plus the art is beautiful and the tone of the story is good.
HAHAHAAH WTF CRAPPY STORY ALL OF THE SAME AUTHOR ARE SOOO STUPID...