I walk arm in arm with my brother, but there are never any looks or auras of "lovers" around us. Maybe the sister was discussing her new boyfriend or something? Still, the idea that she would selfishly request, at the last minute, for her brother to take her shopping instead of go to his JOB is what bothered me. I'm a tutor too and I know what tutors are paid. There is no way in hell I'd drop a lesson for a shopping trip. Not even if my dying grandmother asked. Now, if my dying grandmother were rushed to the hospital, that is something I'd postpone a lesson for. But shopping? No way. She is a big girl, she can go alone. And if it is "dangerous" for her to go, she can shop online.
I didn't like chapter 2 at all. The brother and sister were latching on to each other. I mean I have a pretty good relationship with my siblings. But there is no way in hell I would let one of latch onto me, or I latch on them