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Thank you so much, was going to buy it but you explained perfectly and I no longer even want to read it right now.... maybe later. Lmao, no smexy scenes for my two guys and no me, especially with tragedy...you need smex
I start by saying I really love with all my heart Cesare character. he was evil, he suffer and he was brilliant! especially after he become pure evil. I love how he can manipulate people and kings to his favor and be a badass!! other then him I also love so very much Volpe. ohh my poor Volpe, he stay by his master side until the very end! and I ship them all the way. they much better ship then...some other if you know what I mean.
I also love how despite him become evil, and lose everyone he love, he still kind of stay the same and even better. he still manage to think logicely and give order's and love new inventions. and he suppose to be evil ╮(￣▽￣)╭
that also the problam of this manga. Cesare never seem too "evil" like even after he become a demon. it's bad cause how we suppose to believe or care about the "good" character's that say he is the devil while he only most of the time protect himself and bring only good for his country.
another thing that I have to admit was that I was spoil with this story in youtube and the comments. so I read this manga knowing that Chiaro will betray Cesare and will die. I just didn't know how he will do it. so knowing that, I could exmine his thoughts and behavior in the start until finish of the story without caring for him too much. and I have to say, this manga have a huge problams in peacing what make us really see how ridiculous and unrealistic it is! what again make the reader don't feel much to the story or the character's!
I mean by this is that we have so much first half chapter's for Chairo and Cesare deep relationship beyond friendship. showing so much of the MC and Chairo will to protect and give his life for Cesare, he will share his pain etc.... and nothing about his sister!! then he end up loving and forgeting he even wanted to protect the MC at all or his power. and I will argue Chairo did LOVE him, even if he himself try to deny it. I think the whole "love for the sister" is his way of running away and find a substitution for Cesare that is a girl (vol 4 "when she look down...she almost resembles Cesare")
even if you called it a mistake in the translation, that how the story is show to us readers in english.
also Chairo moves from thinking all the time on Cesare fate, only remember the sister if someone remind him. and then he rememebr "oh yeas, I am in love with that bitch" what again make us readers feel how not reliable his feelings is. and it will happen A LOT in this manga, moving from thinking of his master that he know he cheat on and feel guilty for a long ass chapter's and then one chapter he remembering that he is in love with the girl - what is in the end ruin the whole story!!!
the author should have make out her mind on who to ship cause this was a mass that no, it wasn't fun to read. and only hurt the character's in the end. the same problam go to the sister, how can she suddnly after like 3 days forget her long love for her brother all of sudden and move on to Chairo and have sex with him! this does not make sense!!! what again bring me to another point that she never did really "love" Chairo, she just use him to forget her brother. what makes her character unlikable at all! I actually wish many times in the story, that someone will kill her already cause she was such a big Marry sue it drive me crazy (︶︿︶)＝凸 what again, is bad for the story.
also huge problam was with Chairo, that the MC told him clearly has day "don't ever abandom me" what actually remind me of "black butler" that was better. and what the first thing this guy do,heaving sex with his sister, like after three or four days forgeting all about "OH right I need to be with bro to purify his demons so he won't suffer" how can the guy that was soo determined to do that, suddenly forget his power and role all of sudden!? it was dumb and only show him in a bad light has character. what again hurt the story a lot.
another thing that piss me off is this, okay the bitch sister get a baby after one night sex! ONE NIGHT! Cesare having sex with Sancia the slut more then 5 times in this story!!!! and she NEVER GET pregnant! like ever! okay this is just BS! so Chairo the bitch get a baby, but not Cesare cause of what? he is a demon? so what, he still in a human body, isn't he?!!(╬￣皿￣)凸
well other then that, I like the art. it was very pretty. a shame the story could not decide which character's feelings are real or not cause "ohh no too much BL is bad so let's just force in some stright shit even if it won't fit at all!!".
oh yeas and the incest sub plot, nothing much to say about those two sis/bro thing other then it was pointless and boring to me. since again, the sister is a slut ╮(￣▽￣)╭ and the story trying to force us to care about Alfonso character, what again I could feel you try to force me and it won't work! I was actually happy when he was finally dead! like omg, I was smiling so hard and was "Finally!! we get ridd of that guy. it took him long enough to kill his ass"
it a shame cause Cesare brilliant mind and his love for his only "light" was true until the very end and his development has character was amazing! a shame the plot was a mass with a crap peace, with many shit throwing out there with no point or a real development.
so I"m glad I finish this, but it still not a good story ╮(￣▽￣)╭ but I enjoy Cesare character until the end and I was glad he stay alive.