This doesn't seem like it's finished!! I think it should be longer!! I like this story and I have read this on another site but I couldn't help but read it again!! I thought the stories were very funny and exciting!! I really thought that first story was really funny poor boy got taken by his friends just because he didn't talk loud enough ha ha ha!!! That really made me laugh!! The second one was sweet how the father and the sons friend fell in love with each other was cute!!! I really enjoyed reading them but like I said I think both stories should have been longer!! thx D
This doesn't seem like it's finished!! I think it should be longer!! I like this story and I have read this on another site but I couldn't help but read it again!! I thought the stories were very funny and exciting!! I really thought that first story was really funny poor boy got taken by his friends just because he didn't talk loud enough ha ha ha!!! That really made me laugh!! The second one was sweet how the father and the sons friend fell in love with each other was cute!!! I really enjoyed reading them but like I said I think both stories should have been longer!! thx D