Pulse

Its kinda good but half of it its just a copy of chapters when Olivia came to Sue apartament, just only with more details and change dialogs

Yeah, I put it in the summary that the fic is just a bit different from what happened in that chapter. ^_~

Well, good job. Oh right, it was just one shot or there will be something more

I intended it as a one shot. It was my first attempt in writing something more explicit than my usual. Thanks a lot for your comment. :)

Thanks for one shot, and effort you put to make it