I didn’t mind it, but I want Seto’s side now. And maybe now the MC can properly get over him and get a guy of his own. What happens next??
Isn´t it a one-shot?
Not the point
The fairy has an older brother who follows the MC home and starts to haunt the hotel he manages.That's how I would write it :)
I like it. You should write it as fanfic.
I didn’t mind it, but I want Seto’s side now. And maybe now the MC can properly get over him and get a guy of his own. What happens next??