i love reading yaoi in general but..

mariashi April 28, 2018 3:44 am

i love reading yaoi in general but this one is too cliche for me. The drawing seems so bubbly too. It doesn't really show the emotions, so I don't feel anything while reading it. It seems cute, but doesn't really cut out for a dark theme. Plus, I feel like the story is going way too fast. For instance, we don't really know how the spiky hair guy come to love the uke at the beginning. I feel like the story is developing way too fast. And the mc is way too cliche emo for me.

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    mariashi April 26, 2018 3:15 am
    This reply will be showed after approved! mamaG123

    mhmm. A perfect example of a "good cliche" is Unordinary. It has a good cliche theme/story. This story, on the other hand, is kind of cringy cliche.