Uhh what is this? The story is not bad art is good too but why do i have a feeling that so...

EMPERIAL April 22, 2018 6:21 pm

Uhh what is this? The story is not bad art is good too but why do i have a feeling that something is missing? Like everything looks fake idk....or I can't feel their love , their pleasure, jealousy .... its like too forceful or something? Y tho ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Responses
    takame April 22, 2018 6:38 pm

    Should sparkles are missing.

    takame April 22, 2018 6:38 pm

    Shoujo sparkles (damn typo)

    Nini April 22, 2018 6:48 pm

    ikrr

    EMPERIAL April 22, 2018 6:52 pm
    Shoujo sparkles (damn typo) takame

    Demn it sempai you got it right (≧∀≦)

    EMPERIAL April 22, 2018 6:55 pm
    ikrr Nini

    Right~ (● ̄(エ) ̄●)

    takame April 22, 2018 6:57 pm
    Demn it sempai you got it right (≧∀≦) EMPERIAL

    Gotta admit it, we were low-key waiting for some train wreck to happen hahaha
    ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ