I don't know how I feel about this, it needs more story/plot

HonestlyIdk February 28, 2018 7:09 am

I don't know how I feel about this, it needs more story/plot

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    Errant Belle February 28, 2018 6:58 pm

    My thoughts exactly!
    It jumps around a lot, the dialog doesn't always makes sense, nor does it explain much, plus it feels like there are pieces missing.
    Basically, you can't tell if the story is good or bad because there isn't simply enough of it to make a judgement on.

    HonestlyIdk March 1, 2018 5:40 am
    My thoughts exactly!It jumps around a lot, the dialog doesn't always makes sense, nor does it explain much, plus it feels like there are pieces missing.Basically, you can't tell if the story is good or bad beca... Errant Belle

    Yeah, a shame too. I enjoyed the art

    Errant Belle March 1, 2018 8:15 pm
    Yeah, a shame too. I enjoyed the art HonestlyIdk

    At least you know you're not the only one...
    Clearly, a lot of people wish this was more cogent than it is.