this story had so much potential. But the plot and dialogue fell a little short. I feel like they should have expanded on the characters back story and added more chapters about the relationship.
Have to agree, it's interesting that both characters are erm "flawed", but everything felt so rushed and without some greater context which would have added some much needed to depth to what is quite a shallow plot.
this story had so much potential. But the plot and dialogue fell a little short. I feel like they should have expanded on the characters back story and added more chapters about the relationship.