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When I was reading ur comment I felt like i’m reading a book ( I don’t want to be rude I said it as a compliment)
Haha aww, thank you! So sweet <3
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When I was reading ur comment I felt like i’m reading a book ( I don’t want to be rude I said it as a compliment)
Haha aww, thank you! So sweet <3
This was just a mushy, fluffy love shtick for a long time and while I wasn't enthralled, it was nice so I kept reading.
But it's slowly gotten more tangled, the emotions more strained as the fluff was injected with shots of gritty reality where it's completely believable but beautifully painful to watch as their choices shape their relationship and the consequences mount until the point they'll HAVE to work it out together and not just smear the whole plot with a bland line like "LOVE CONQUERS ALL, EVEN IF YOU DON'T TRY BECAUSE YAY LOVE!"
TBH, I'm loving this. It's getting some amazing layers now.ლ(´ڡ`ლ)