Responses
This is my fisrt work :D that's why it's a mess sorry for that. Right now I'm in my second comic which is a little bit better than this one.
I like your critics, what do you think about the art style of my second comic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/rotten-roses/prologue-part-6/viewer?title_no=112576&episode_no=8
:3
Looks like it was drawn by about 5 different people of varying artistic talent, and written by a beginner. I was kinda enjoying it anyway until I got to chapter 5 when the plot took a very abrupt, random turn out of nowhere. Doubt I'll come back for updates :/