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I didn't read the whole thing, just the conclusion. But still I can deduce that whole thing is pretty good, considering that there is good reasoning behind your fanfic. I would pat you if I could (⌒▽⌒) *virtual pat*, *pat*...
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Hi, girls! I wrote a fanfic of the yuri Serenade. If you are interested this is the link:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/13695663