Younger or older seme?

helvetica_soryou February 11, 2018 4:12 pm

Hi everyone!! I'm on the process of writing a yaoi transported to another fantasy world novel because I'm crazy about this tag and I want to share my current passion to everyone.

Story tags: transported to another world, game elements, slow burn, weak to strong.

Its about a 25 years old guy named Kazue, who trying to restart his life. Due to bullying in highschool, he's fallen into depression and became a neet. However one day together with 4 other people he's Transported to another world and was blessed with light magic (healer).

I want to emphasize his character development from a shy,weak will and insecure person to someone more confident and accept himself for who he is.

The main love interest will be a well knownn general from the new world.Their relationship will progress from acquantance, friendship, one sidedness (from the main side) and so on. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

But I'm still kinda indecisive about the age of the seme. Would he be older and someone who the main looks up to? or someone younger and have the main admire his achievements and self-confidence?

I think both would be a good influence and would serve the purpose of propelling the protaganist to improve himself personally. Coz thts wht one of the focus of my story: self-improvement, to learn to accept one's self and build confidence.

Let me know wht u think!

Responses
    Eona-chan February 11, 2018 5:56 pm

    I think it would be good if the seme was younger but well it's just my opinion ( ̄▽ ̄). Where your yaoi will be readable ? Because i love yaoi who takes place in fantasy world !! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ I hope i could read it one day ^-^

    Shinon256 February 11, 2018 7:22 pm

    I think that seme should be older, because to become general takes years o experience maybe 30 or something, very good leader but when it comes to love he is shy :3 idk i like these kinds of semes, but others opinions are good too

    helvetica_soryou February 12, 2018 4:18 pm

    Wow thank you three for ur input its given me a lot of ideas and concept to think about. Thnks for the help ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ Definitely appreciate it!! I'll most likely publish it a wattpad but I'm looking into other websites to post it as well. I'll reply to this thread again once its out

    redrat14 February 20, 2018 10:01 pm

    I think it should be younger. its much more fun that way (=・ω・=)