This story started off good to me, it had great potential, but then every chapter just bec...

pedolecki January 27, 2018 8:38 pm

This story started off good to me, it had great potential, but then every chapter just became about sex. Their was no character development and everything at the end just had a rapey vibe to it. No one seemed to give a clear voice of consent. And it was tied together sloppily.

Responses
    Anonymous January 27, 2018 9:05 pm

    I like you.

    Alexiss February 1, 2018 9:34 pm

    You expect too much from porn ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    pedolecki February 3, 2018 1:33 am
    You expect too much from porn ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ Alexiss

    So all porn is supposed to be borderline rape? And if so why am I supposed to enjoy that?

    Alexiss February 6, 2018 10:14 am

    Some do enjoy that, also it's smut... Smut/hentai/mature (sex kind), dunno all the tags for a very good example, but they focus on sex, forced or not, enjoyable or not. I've read a lot of mangas like this one, short not even complete plot, then lots of sex.
    The main focus is and was sex, that's it, it's easy.
    For its kind, this was pretty good, it had a logic, not a bright and sharp one, but it had one. Again, for its kind, I kinda liked it.
    And yeah, no one said you have to like it, some do, some don't. Some want a lot of plot and development, others may want just porn with a story.

    pedolecki February 7, 2018 2:48 am
    Some do enjoy that, also it's smut... Smut/hentai/mature (sex kind), dunno all the tags for a very good example, but they focus on sex, forced or not, enjoyable or not. I've read a lot of mangas like this one, ... Alexiss

    Well that's cool for those people. But I don't like romanticized rape in whatever I'm reading,

    Anonymous February 25, 2018 5:58 pm
    Well that's cool for those people. But I don't like romanticized rape in whatever I'm reading, pedolecki

    This doesn't have rape stupid! Both want it so it's not rape, and you call yourself a Yaoi fan? Fuck off! You don't belong here bitch! Get the fuck off this website! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸

    I'm going to stalk you're account lol What a loser!

    Kiwi February 25, 2018 6:12 pm
    This doesn't have rape stupid! Both want it so it's not rape, and you call yourself a Yaoi fan? Fuck off! You don't belong here bitch! Get the fuck off this website! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 I'm going to stalk you'r... @Anonymous

    What a stupid response. Everybody has a right to express their opinion. You are rude, ignorant and childish. You don't own this website or get to say who can stay or not.
    Readers that look like a 12 year old spoiled brat with a mean girl complex like you who give Yaoi fans a bad name. Not all of us think that all the readers have to like the same trope or belong to a stupid clique. ALL READERS ARE WELCOME AND ALL OPINIONS, GOOD OR BAD ARE WELCOME TOO.
    Don't like that others criticize what you like? Grow up, get over it. Go take a walk. Fuck off, you tantrum little bitch!

    Anonymous February 25, 2018 6:20 pm
    This doesn't have rape stupid! Both want it so it's not rape, and you call yourself a Yaoi fan? Fuck off! You don't belong here bitch! Get the fuck off this website! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 I'm going to stalk you'r... @Anonymous

    Please seek help.
    What a piece of shit you think you are to say who belongs or not in this website. If we start harassing people just because we don't like their opinions, this site probably won't last long. The only loser here is you.

    pedolecki February 26, 2018 8:58 pm
    This doesn't have rape stupid! Both want it so it's not rape, and you call yourself a Yaoi fan? Fuck off! You don't belong here bitch! Get the fuck off this website! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 I'm going to stalk you'r... @Anonymous

    How cute