Good grief, that was awful.

Zarathustra January 26, 2018 5:27 pm

WTF. What just happened? It's like author got bored and just wrote the most half assed closing ever. No development. The main pair hardly gets any sexy time, Hajun's development never came ... and as usual in Yaoi world, awful behavior is nothing - as long as go under the disguise of chasing someone and you patch a lot of fluffy things around. And really, did Hajun really needed to be rejected properly after being humiliated once? And get flowers for being a snake ? I mean, It's all so simple minded.

I have the impression that the author also feel in love with the Pinkie guy and lost interest for the main couple but couldn't change route so far ahead. So she just wrote the quickest shit to get them out of the way. It's clear from the raws that he gets a much sexier and more thoughtful closure.
What a fucking waste of time reading this one.

The title should be: "Just forget about the title, wait until you see the Pinkie Guy" ...

Thinking about it, this whole story is hilarious because of Pinkie stealing the show.

Responses
    Kimmy January 26, 2018 5:15 pm

    Agree!!! If this was supposed to be a love story between Hajun and Minho, there should be more development there from start or at least way more chapters working out their bond.
    I feel bad not only for Hajun that never got much attention from the author. I feel bad for Minho that deserved his time winning over his sweetheart the right way.

    I don't even think I can stick around for the Pinkie's grand finale. It all just sound rushed and oversimplified.

    Too bad. It could have been such a cute story if handled properly. Well, that's Yaoi. Can't expect too much. :)

    JJ January 26, 2018 5:34 pm

    I'm laughing my ass off ...

    The last scene with Blackie giving flowers to Pinkie ... 'here, thanks for using my feelings and admiration for you in the most cruel way possible' . You are such a great guy, Sunbae!!

    I mean it's all so fucked up twilight zone.