It feels like the two chapters aren't really chapters just trailers to what is going to happen in the story. Personally, what was just thrown at the reader should have a bit more of a build-up in some way or told differently as to not confuse the reader too much.
It feels like the two chapters aren't really chapters just trailers to what is going to happen in the story. Personally, what was just thrown at the reader should have a bit more of a build-up in some way or told differently as to not confuse the reader too much.