this kind of cliche trope is getting old. the story is predictable too, the only good part...

narumaki November 16, 2017 9:48 pm

this kind of cliche trope is getting old. the story is predictable too, the only good part is the art. at least the seme tried the leave the uke when he saw the mark,(because fuck cheaters!) instead of the other typical, get sad, doesnt say anything, proceeds to have sex with the uke wondering who was with the uke that gave him the mark, and what did they do together, type of no backbone seme.

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    narumaki November 16, 2017 11:08 pm

    well i had to read it to give an opinion on it right?

    narumaki November 17, 2017 12:19 am
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    "could read the summary or first few pages right?" and i did, so thanks, try again, hun. "and if it was so "predictable'' then don't read it anymore" yeah, and thanks for telling me what to do, because i asked for your advice, and from now on i'll listen to everything you say regardless if i asked for your thoughts on it or not. happy? .-.

    adonyx November 17, 2017 4:42 am
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    YIKES, IT WAS SARCASM. And your lack and puncuation and decent grammar made that cancerous to read. Omg. Please don't drop out of school.

    adonyx November 17, 2017 7:46 pm
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    Damn, I feel really bad for you. :/ You'll overcome your issues one day, I believe in you. <3

    narumaki November 17, 2017 8:52 pm
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    fucking idiot.

    narumaki November 17, 2017 9:21 pm
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    sigh. a 10 year old throwing a tantrum spreading false words, because they're confident its correct when it's not. leave this discussion to the adults, alright? fucking idiot.

    narumaki November 17, 2017 10:24 pm
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    what is this? widdle baby throwing a tantrum? oh no! someone is being a nnnauuuuggghhtttyyy child. time out for you! go sit at the corner, the only time you can get up, is if you need to take a poo-poo, but thats it! i will let you go play once you've learned your lesson! i am veeerrryyy disappointed in you, missy! throwing a tantrum is a biiiggggg no-no!

    narumaki November 17, 2017 10:48 pm
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    lmao, what you don't understand is basic english, grammar and spelling. stay in school kid, better yet, start over from preschool. i feel sorry for your parents who raised a nuisance that has a brain the size of a pea. keep on acting confident like you know what you're talking about, it'll just make me look smarter. no use in arguing with a 5 year old with immature tendencies. ciao!

    narumaki November 17, 2017 11:22 pm
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    ppft

    narumaki November 17, 2017 11:39 pm
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    sigh