....wtf happened between chapter 5 to 6...? I feel like it would be important to show what...

Viira November 14, 2017 12:35 am

....wtf happened between chapter 5 to 6...? I feel like it would be important to show what happened when he went home....so confusing.... but god I love this story. Its so unsettling

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    peachie-kun November 14, 2017 4:08 am

    I liked the unsettling vibe of this. I feel like there should have been more, like there were missing pieces. Its a good story I just wish sensei developed it more :(

    Viira November 15, 2017 6:47 am
    I liked the unsettling vibe of this. I feel like there should have been more, like there were missing pieces. Its a good story I just wish sensei developed it more :( peachie-kun

    I agree. It had a real psychological thriller romance vibe to it. Definitely think it feels like there are lots of missing pieces but also a lot of the missing pieces feel like if filled in would complicate parts of the story that are kind of nice left vague just because it adds to the feeling of not full comprehending the emotions and characters.

    peachie-kun November 15, 2017 2:17 pm
    I agree. It had a real psychological thriller romance vibe to it. Definitely think it feels like there are lots of missing pieces but also a lot of the missing pieces feel like if filled in would complicate par... Viira

    Very well said. The missing pieces do add to the story more than taking away from it. Now there's this sense of mystery and darkness. Like things are going on between them that we don't see. ~