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I know it seemed so dead like reading from cue cards
I do not think it will get better though. It seems that this one will stay superficial since the goal is to gain popularity. I am even waiting a rape,rape,rape,jealously,love,love,jealously,love,the end plot.
Yahhh but I'm sure if the mangaka keeps practicing on drawing then she'll keep improving as well :D
Somehow the dialogues don't feel alive...like the mangaka should really make some more dialogues and monologs (like what the characters have in their mind, what they say in their heart and so on)
The flow of the dialogues can also be improved (๑•ㅂ•)و✧