the story and plot feels so off line it makes no sense. also one can tell that the person who wrote the story is kinda new to the whole thing. also the jokes are very stupid.
i didn't want to say it but i agree
but the artwork is great thou xD
ah yes, of course. the story is just off, and almost cliche, in my opinion. lol let's hope for a little improvement in the next few chapters.
the story and plot feels so off line it makes no sense. also one can tell that the person who wrote the story is kinda new to the whole thing. also the jokes are very stupid.