the story and plot feels so off line it makes no sense. also one can tell that the person ...

Meyu October 11, 2017 2:25 pm

the story and plot feels so off line it makes no sense. also one can tell that the person who wrote the story is kinda new to the whole thing. also the jokes are very stupid.

Responses
    Bum October 11, 2017 8:45 pm

    i didn't want to say it but i agree

    Meyu October 11, 2017 9:26 pm

    but the artwork is great thou xD

    Bum October 12, 2017 12:22 pm
    but the artwork is great thou xD Meyu

    ah yes, of course. the story is just off, and almost cliche, in my opinion. lol let's hope for a little improvement in the next few chapters.