The art changed so many times. Its like 5 different ppl all trying to tell the same story. It doesn't flow too well either.
Like lets just talk about the first 3 chapters. The king changed so much each chapter that I didn't know WHO he was. And the setting changed from the forest, to finding her in the water, back to in the forest. And his clothes changed along with the art style and his appearance. Even on chapter 12, the art changes again (but at this point it seems like artist is progressing and improving their style, not so much completely switching like the earlier chapters...)
The chapters don't really pick up where they left off sometimes. It reads like a couple pages or chapters are missing. And it doesnt help that I notice the change of art style around the same time that I notice a lot of the plot holes and jumps. Random side stories are hinted at for .4secs and then back to main priestess. Like who is the pink-hair's brother cuz she mentioned him a couple times so apparently he's relevant? Who is purple-hair eyepatch cuz he seems important to the king? Whats up with Yellow-hair and Green priestess cuz their convo was so short and random? And now someone is plotting behind the king's back? I guess all of these will unfold eventually as the story continues. ------------------- Honestly, if anyone read this far, cool! Basically, the story is just starting so I'll cut it some slack. I've read webtoons where the art and storytelling gets better and better as time goes by, and thats great to see. The chapters are pretty short, so we're still very early in the story. The art, and storytelling may sort themselves out with time. Just gotta let things unfold/settle in.
The art changed so many times. Its like 5 different ppl all trying to tell the same story. It doesn't flow too well either.
Like lets just talk about the first 3 chapters. The king changed so much each chapter that I didn't know WHO he was. And the setting changed from the forest, to finding her in the water, back to in the forest. And his clothes changed along with the art style and his appearance. Even on chapter 12, the art changes again (but at this point it seems like artist is progressing and improving their style, not so much completely switching like the earlier chapters...)
The chapters don't really pick up where they left off sometimes. It reads like a couple pages or chapters are missing. And it doesnt help that I notice the change of art style around the same time that I notice a lot of the plot holes and jumps. Random side stories are hinted at for .4secs and then back to main priestess. Like who is the pink-hair's brother cuz she mentioned him a couple times so apparently he's relevant? Who is purple-hair eyepatch cuz he seems important to the king? Whats up with Yellow-hair and Green priestess cuz their convo was so short and random? And now someone is plotting behind the king's back? I guess all of these will unfold eventually as the story continues.
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Honestly, if anyone read this far, cool! Basically, the story is just starting so I'll cut it some slack. I've read webtoons where the art and storytelling gets better and better as time goes by, and thats great to see. The chapters are pretty short, so we're still very early in the story. The art, and storytelling may sort themselves out with time. Just gotta let things unfold/settle in.