Am I the only one?

Mochi_BonBon September 7, 2017 4:47 pm

I felt like it was going too fast://.. it feels like the author squeezed the story in 4 chapters. It felt forced, and the development went way to fast.. suddenly the characters changed their minds overnight. It's like they gave her a limit of 4 chapters..
The plot is good.. very well written. The pacing was a bit of a turn off... would've been perfect if the chapters were atleast 7-10 chapters maybe..? I feel like, there's much more to it. I couldn't gasp the story and the characters...
It's just my opinion tho

Responses
    bruh September 7, 2017 7:45 pm

    Agree on that, if this was more slow paced and characters were given more time and possibilities to grow into each other as for me it wouldve lived up to doukyuusei but I think its still good since time thing in this one is kinda off,so its easy to fill in their interactions,also since it has sequel where like 7chapters are filled with that kind of development this one still manages to be one of my face,but honestly its mostly because of art and I adore the way endou is drawn

    Fujoshi for Fluff only October 26, 2018 8:33 pm

    There is a sequel though..